The guardian angel character doesn't work at all because he does all the work for Frank, therefore we don't see a strong enough character arc of the main character.
New idea:
Frank goes on news program but is set up by Clarissa and Sinclair to be made to look stupid.
He is really cross at this and decides to do his own investigations into the whole area of the Southbank.
He uncovers corruption.
He makes Clarissa help him.
He shows up Sinclair for what he really is.
He gets to save skate park. Yippee!
By leaving out guardian angel and making Frank more pro-active I think I'm giving him a better voice. God.....I hope so. Two weeks to go before this has too be handed in.......help........!
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